I've begun working on a third revision of
The Hand she was Dealt. It will take too long to delineate all the little details I somehow managed to iron out. I would show you my desktop now only it hasn't changed much.
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"I will show you this." |
Not featured:
- Gail, our other best friend, who arrived half an hour or so afterward. I was leaning on the table between B and I.
- The other cupcake Gail ordered when she arrived.
- Dinner at Friuli Tratoria because Gail had not eaten yet.
What I remember:
- Ruby over dinner (Crazy Katsu)
- How she no longer wore glasses, the girl whose image I kept in my mind was rougher and, now, far from the original.
- The large phone in her hands.
- Her speech patterns changed over time; now, no longer erratic. She no longer trails off when she tells stories, that's the biggest change.
- And her stories themselves were different. In a different league, about vastly different things that I forget how I could have imagined we'd talk about what we've always talked about.
- She wore, still, a frilly top in an appropriate somber color and when she laughed she still covered her mouth with a hand. And true enough when Gail came I could safely disappear into the glorious babble of their easy conversation.
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